If I consider the issue as a "global warming in the world," I probably will say that it exists. but I have an opinion based only on those facts which have been brought to my attention.
In particular, I have seen a few movies from National Geographic, which in one voice shouting that the glaciers are melting. they melt at such a phenomenal rate that Australia will soon become one of the continents where the snow is completely absent. The temperature of the world ocean is raised; some species of shellfish with coral reefs are dying and other disasters.
Global warming is not a myth. But the causes of global warming are myths? On the Russian TV channel showed a documentary film "The Story of a deception, or global warming," which debunked the myth of the warming caused by the greenhouse effect because that is not present. Greenhouse effect, primarily heated upper atmosphere and not near ground where we are habitable, and the temperature rise is not observed. A significant increase in the average temperature on Earth began in the late 19th century, when industrial emissions to the atmosphere were not significant . The 50-70 years of the 20th century are characterized by a sharp decline in the average annual temperature, and then it rises again and remains relatively high and now and how climate scientists believe is the result of increased solar activity. The increase in carbon dioxide in the atmosphere goes after raising temperature. Therefore the determining factor of global warming, which has long periodicity character is the temperature, not the so-called greenhouse effect. On the theory of the greenhouse effect people earn a lot of money, where business and politics are intertwined.
But, because I am a supporter of the theory that the earth is gradually changing its orbit to a circular on elliptic, I want to believe that this is not the work of people. This theory, I also saw in the films National Geographic. It is painted in detail and says that we live in one of the interglacial periods. We must enjoy it. The world characterized by sudden changes in temperature, and other disasters. and that before that we had a relatively equable climate it is a gift from above.
So, I say that all the hysteria around the issue of "global warming due to the greenhouse effect" is a political and economic tool; anthropogenic factor in the climate change process is completely absent; the planet is a subject which independently disposes of its climate.
Edward Yom
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Does the essay have five paragraphs? Yes
Does the essay have a thesis statement that identifies the writer’s point of view? Yes
Do the body paragraphs include topic sentences that support the writer’s position? Yes
Does the third body paragraph contain a counter-argument with either a refutation or a concession? Yes
Do the details in the body paragraphs support reasons stated in the topic sentence? Yes
Does the conclusion restate the thesis in different words, make a prediction, or state the issue in a broader context? Yes
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1. Do you have a thesis statement that takes a clear position? Yes
Do the body paragraphs include distinct reasons to support your position? Yes
Does the third body paragraph contain a counter-argument with either a refutation or a concession? Yes
Did you use connectors that show contrast or addition? Yes
Did you use any noun clauses? No
Did you use any adverbial clauses? No
Does your conclusion repeat the reasons in your argument? Yes
Lee Dong hyun
ReplyDeleteDoes the essay have five paragraphs?- Yes
Does the essay have a thesis statement that identifies the writer's point of view?- Yes
Do the body paragraphs include topic sentences that support the writer's position?- no
Does the third body paragraph contain a counter-argument with either a refutation or a concession? Yes
Do the details in the body paragraphs support reasons stated in the topic sentence?- In some
Does the conclusion restate the thesis in different words, make a prediction, or state the issue in a broader context?-Yes
Do you have a thesis statement that takes a clear position? no
Do the body paragraph include distinct reasons to support your opinion- in some
Does the third body paragraph contain a counter-argument with either a refutation or a concession? yes
Did you use any connectors that show contrast or addition? Yes
Did you use any noun clauses? yes
Did you use any adverbial clauses? no
Does your conclusion repeat the reasons in your argument? yes